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Legaiah 51F
119 posts
11/1/2009 6:13 pm

Last Read:
11/20/2009 5:27 pm

IF ONLY




If only i had a dollar for every tear that fell from my eyes,
I'd be a millionaire.

if only i could only smile at the sound of your voice,
I'd be a happier person.

if only i could laugh with you like before,
I'd never have these tears.

if only things were like they used to be,
I'd never be sad.

if only these days didn't pass so slowly,
I'd be able to move on.

if only i could talk to you like i did before,
I'd be in less pain.

if only you could hold me and say it's alright,
I'd feel relieved.

if only you could kiss me like before,
I'd feel like it was the first.

IF ONLY i was with you again,
I'd feel less empty inside...



We may not be together but we will never be through.


frozenflower3 64F

11/1/2009 6:33 pm

Sis, that's a lot of "if". in time you will forget and a newer love will make you happier. Just remember this time now so you can move on and it will be for the better.


kryztal_babe 41F
76 posts
11/1/2009 10:06 pm

Omg.
exactly how i feel.
i love it.
it rocks!!!!
two thumbs up.
you should win an emmy or something.


eb1209

11/2/2009 3:54 am

I'd like to think that WE can BETTER ourselves from the lessons that we learned from the past experiences...good or bad...

Just call me ELZ


_3sha_ 36F
125 posts
11/5/2009 4:47 am

I love some one far away
but i know he no longer loves me as much.
Anyway amazing poem.
I know how you feel. It is hard.


sun_set 41F
93 posts
11/6/2009 5:26 am

The love,
and the tears,
separate - nothing really,
together - everything.


UniqueCorn 39F
97 posts
11/7/2009 3:45 pm

You can fall in love in an instant. It's letting go that takes time.


SouthWind 40F
83 posts
11/8/2009 1:21 am

Don't let someone become your everything,
because when they're gone you have nothing!


CreamyShake 39F
113 posts
11/8/2009 1:21 pm

Absolutely amazing! u got across wut u wanted perfectly! loved it!


stirrcrazy 39F
85 posts
11/9/2009 1:20 pm

Be not afraid.
The shadows will pass,
and the Light will return,
and spirit will conquer all,
in due time.


_lipstick_ 42F
125 posts
11/12/2009 4:05 am

The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost.


ion_chief 39F
166 posts
11/14/2009 1:11 pm

All the things we feel we can become for another.
Well done.


stigma 43F
124 posts
11/16/2009 1:08 pm

Why do things have to pass you by?
The things that are so irreplaceable,
they seem to run by without giving us
the chance to see how much we've just lost.


mia_belle 38F
533 posts
11/17/2009 1:40 pm

It is sad but has an air of comfort to your words.

*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.*


megz001 38F
205 posts
11/20/2009 2:56 pm

Amazing work, your talent is very good.
you grabbed the reader in from the start
and kept the flow remaining strong to the end.