Releasing My Mask
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*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.* |
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10/28/2009 12:35 am |
If you wrote this yourself then you are one hell of a poet. Beautifully written. I have been inactive in this site as people just post other people's writings. But this is something very unique and refreshing. I look forward to your future poems. 
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9/12/2009 5:20 am |
OUCH... the worst-case scenario on a first date... 
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9/9/2009 5:07 am |
girl... im not a girl like you, and im not suppose to tell you what you should do, i know how you and i understand your emotion, im married also, but i got separated 5 years back due to family difficulties, i have a girl friend before and i told her the truth after few months and i saw her how much she was hurt that time, but i honestly separated with my wife, i never introduce my wife to my girl friend. it was so painful for her much more than your because he has introduce to you his wife. well i can only advice you, put your self in safe way as posible, think of your future with someone whom you think will fight and willing to sacrifice him self for you and cheer you up make you feel complete. it will come to you... just wait...
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9/1/2009 10:07 pm |
i've been there before and am still after 3 years or more , but nothing changed. but me, am still waiting so rise your head and walk your way on, stay clean!
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9/1/2009 12:09 am |
Sometimes we tend to be in despair when the person we love leaves us, but the truth is, it's not our loss, but theirs, for they left the only person who wouldn't give up on them.
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8/30/2009 8:37 pm |
oh honey... there is nothing you can do. he'll still end up with that gal! Think about it...
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8/30/2009 3:17 am |
this happens when he's your prince charming, but you're not his cinderella. so sad..
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8/29/2009 7:25 am |
Sometimes you need to run away just to see who will come after you.
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8/29/2009 2:38 am |
Sometimes we tend to be in despair when the person we love leaves us, but the truth is, it's not our loss, but theirs, for they left the only person who wouldn't give up on them.
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8/27/2009 5:24 pm |
He can make you happy, but you don't need him to be happy.
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8/25/2009 12:01 am |
So beautifully sad. The depth of the emotion in your words very well placed and painted.. An outstanding piece..
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8/24/2009 3:23 pm |
Living in the past causes you to miss out on the present. Life is too short to let it pass you by.
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8/22/2009 7:00 pm |
Whoever said it is better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all, must not have had their heart broken.
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8/22/2009 12:11 am |
Hmm.. Damn Sad.. but Damn Lovely.. brilliant piece of work.. Loved IT!!
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8/20/2009 7:37 am |
Wow!...superb write! and i loved the last stanza great ending ..the poem held emotions which were well penned.. Good job!
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8/20/2009 12:28 am |
So sad sis, muntik pa kong mapaiyak.. Very nice Blog. or I am beautiful because you love me?
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8/19/2009 11:19 pm |
dreams we probably hate, what a sorry fate, what a miserable life, that cuts like a knife! What you read, what you hear, leave it here!
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 8/19/2009 8:07 pm |
Hayz!...what a sad story my dear... ..better luck next time...    
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8/19/2009 6:33 pm |
..a perfect start.but then again..with you..it`s almost predictable..but you`re really great at it ..Miss.. Love like it`s the best there is.. like it`s the last one you`ll have..and make it real..
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8/19/2009 6:27 pm |
this is so sad.. the ending was very unexpected but it really added to you poem.. it was a very enjoyable read..
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