++ Feelings beyond Repair ++
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*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.* |
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7/28/2009 4:46 pm |
Amazing, heart wrenching piece. I could feel your pain. I'm sorry you're in so much sorrow Mia. I know how you feel in a certain aspect. Remember that we're not as perfect as we would like to be but perfect in our own way. If you ever need an ear, I'm right here. With love.
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7/27/2009 4:38 pm |
Wow. im in tears. (your writing has a tendency to do that to me) i cant believe this the words just speak to me in every way. it really tugs on my heart. wow. good job.
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7/26/2009 5:58 pm |
Its look like a story to me but this one is great!! your feeling is my feeling too...
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7/25/2009 7:58 pm |
You can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes, you might find you get what you need.
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7/25/2009 5:36 pm |
Love is not a mere four letters, it is so much more, not something you just say. It is something so powerful and emotional beyond words. If you love someone you don't just say it you show them, you do something.
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7/24/2009 10:11 pm |
An amazing write... aww I just loved it. Very powerful, yet delicate writing that touched my heart. You're a wonderful writer... who can truly express on paper the pains and turmoils of the heart... An exquisite piece of writing... 
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7/24/2009 6:22 pm |
sometimes life feels like you are going in the right direction and then bamm u get knocked over by the love bug. What the hell is the point. Screw it.
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7/23/2009 6:49 pm |
Love arrives on tip toes, but bangs the door when it leaves. 
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7/23/2009 1:14 am |
Never be sad for what is over, just be glad that it was once yours.
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7/22/2009 4:46 pm |
You captured those melancholic state in a very painfully beautiful verse. No wonder, you have your own way with those forms. Very nice job dear sissy..
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7/21/2009 5:55 pm |
it's really good. the end literally gave me chills. awesome. i know just how you feel.
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7/21/2009 6:30 am |
Such a lovely poem, but melancholic..
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 7/21/2009 3:23 am |
"hearts broken will stay with us forever, but oh, what beautiful poems those heartbreaks will make..." love the way you write, Really Penman
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7/20/2009 11:51 pm |
Wow., this brought tears in my eyes. life is pretty messed up sometimes and other times things happen that way where you honestly have no idea who there is to blame. there are some cruel people that would do things and that's honestly want makes life crazy and out of order. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
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