LIAR!!
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*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.* |
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10/28/2009 12:46 am |
I really wanted to comment on this but seems too personal. Anyway, I like your writing style. Will check your blog once in a while.
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7/21/2009 6:16 pm |
I REMEMBER MY PAST HEHEHE WE NEED TO BECOME STRONG ONE SO THAT WE CAN FACE ALL THE TRIALS IN LIFE... NICE POEM SISSY
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7/20/2009 7:17 pm |
How do you describe it when something touches your heart but yet no tears fall? this poem did that to me. i have been crying for the last hour and I'm out of tears. and when i read this poem, it hit me like a ton of bricks. He said he didn't want to hurt me, but he lied even to himself. i will be fine someday, but till then, I'll have this poem to look back on.
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7/20/2009 4:11 pm |
whats the point in second chances when people will never change?
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7/19/2009 9:39 pm |
Men are liars. We'll lie about lying if we have to.
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7/19/2009 7:02 pm |
a bad liar.
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7/19/2009 5:43 pm |
Gosh, the title speak for itself. this was intense, and so deep. i loved your wording sis mia, well done.
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7/19/2009 3:56 pm |
Oh my goodness..this poem is amazing... i love it... it reminds me of my ex... everything reminded me of him... he was a liar and he messed our relationship up.. and he tried so hard to get me back... i fell for it before..but now i finally let him go.. absolutely loved it. flow and rhyming were flawless.
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7/19/2009 1:44 am |
this poem is nice and it helps me to forget my liar ex boyfriend. i hate him so much.
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7/17/2009 9:00 pm |
Little did you know HE was just another dead end road, made with pretty lies and broken dreams.
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7/16/2009 11:55 pm |
Why do we wait until it is too late? Why do we let someone else have what we were too scared to reach out and take?
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7/16/2009 12:24 am |
"Too bad we'd never work Its a shame you're a liar." POWERFUL! Wow .. outstanding ending here! Unique.
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7/14/2009 7:27 pm |
It's good you had opened your eyes to reality that he isn't the right one for you..Keep the door of your heart open to anyone who'll knock and move on.Life is worth living for.
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7/12/2009 1:55 am |
You can fall in love in an instant. It's letting go that takes time. God bless you, sis..i'll pray for fast healing.
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7/11/2009 2:47 pm |
i can feel the pain...just like my story... The most beautiful things cannot b seen& touched-they must felt with heart ![]()
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7/11/2009 5:32 am |
I look at your pretty profile picture, and I see sadness. I read your wonderful poems, and I hear deep hurt and pain. As strange as this may sound, even though it may be time to move on, I encourage you to hold on to good memories. It would be a shame to loose them as well. Remember the last time that you laughed to tears, cried of broken heart, smiled uncontrollably with lover, ....... quivered, felt alive ...
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7/11/2009 2:30 am |
Forget past mistakes. Forget failures. Forget about everything except what you're going to do. god bless
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7/10/2009 9:49 pm |
there's the pain that you've been had or played...discovering early is a better blow to have than to find a strike that makes the wound as lingering...it is not always a beautiful feeling one truth we face... “I hold it true, whatever befall; I it, when I sorrow most.![]()
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7/10/2009 9:47 pm |
Sis, Been in this mess time and time again. But, my heart just wanting to be sucked in all the time. It all meshed into one the lies/pretense...of unreal love!!! [I God is pure love...
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7/10/2009 8:49 pm |
wow, another good one, you are something at the writing thing BTW, how do you do the nice border and colored box? Are you doing it separately, creating an image of poem, border, box and all, then just inserting jpg? Remember the last time that you laughed to tears, cried of broken heart, smiled uncontrollably with lover, ....... quivered, felt alive ...
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