Secret Love
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*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.* |
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10/28/2009 12:56 am |
Read all your poems starting with the latest post. This seems to be my favorite so far. No bitterness yet but just pure longing. Really like the way you write. Short verses, about 4 four words per line. Very concise and clear but still evokes all that emotion. And there is a certain ryhthm and ryhme, almost like a song. I won't comment on the content as this seems too personal.
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6/5/2009 6:16 pm |
we got poetry in common nice poems you got here thanks for sharing its nice to be important but its more important to be nice
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6/5/2009 6:15 pm |
I will be here to stay even till I am old and gray even when the sun stop shining brighter and there is no more laughter i will always remember the nights and days that we treasure and thank God in an everlasting symphony of love I will be here to stay seeing you through the darkness and smiling till the stroke of day touching every moment wanted with the authenticity of our love embracing optimism with the tenderness of your warmth through the futuristic path that lighten up our Heart Don't worry my love I will be here to stay By ricky its nice to be important but its more important to be nice
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6/5/2009 4:10 pm |
Love is sweet when it's new, but sweeter when it's true.
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6/5/2009 1:35 am |
a very simple secret; it is only with the heart that one can see rightly, what is essential is invisible to the eye.
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6/5/2009 12:26 am |
"Like gold to aery thinness beat" - John Donne
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6/3/2009 10:23 pm |
Perhaps people like us cannot love. Ordinary people can - that is their secret. I met,I laughed,I learned to love,I lied,I lost,I hurt.
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6/2/2009 4:30 am |
n why u r in love with ''' Honesty i's a big word..........
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6/1/2009 9:21 pm |
A first love always remains in a secret place in the heart.
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6/1/2009 3:44 pm |
This is love: to fly toward a secret sky.
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5/31/2009 9:44 pm |
wow! pa secret,secret ka pa!! ![]() ![]() ![]() one of old time favorite: is it by freddie fender ba?
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5/31/2009 9:43 am |
Love is something you give and not asking something in return ^_^
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5/30/2009 6:56 pm |
take a deep breath whisper it to the wind that your secret love may it hear how you love him so well,,, Teach yourself to speak slowly but think quickly. ![]() ![]()
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5/30/2009 6:34 pm |
In life we all have an unspeakable secret, an irreversible regret, an unreachable dream and an unforgettable love.
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