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Twas a Mistake
*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.* |
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a mistake I was, I thought not rain came pouring when the sun was hot we gave it our best shot midnight melodies told no lie but jealousies made lots of alibi restless hearts fell to the stars and drove our romance like a recked car but after saying all you are still my heart crushed by matching moments drove us apart still distance tells no lie we will never be apart by ricky I just wrote this by reading your poem, thanks its nice to be important but its more important to be nice
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5/20/2009 10:18 pm |
Sweet lady! why thus doth a tear steal its way, Down a cheek which outrivals thy bosom in hue? Yet why do I ask?---to distraction a prey, Thy reason has perish'd, with Love's last adieu!
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5/20/2009 3:07 am |
t whom r u talking?
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5/20/2009 3:04 am |
Where u were one years ago?
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Nice poem SABRINA. By the way the lines "With your lying words, You had my flattered.", same as the original poem, contained minor error: "With your lying words, You had my WHAT flattered." Praised WHAT? Your heart? Your ego? sabrina who? *It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.*
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Nice poem SABRINA. By the way the lines "With your lying words, You had my flattered.", same as the original poem, contained minor error: "With your lying words, You had my WHAT flattered." Praised WHAT? Your heart? Your ego?
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This poem has such reality within it. No matter what one's age, it still holds true. I love it! I was there just 2 years ago, I had to walk away before it killed me. Bravo, mia_belle!
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