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Denied  

lickquid
11/11/2008 8:38 pm

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12/27/2008 12:29 am

When being denied by a love one,
our familiar world seems to become a different place-
one without joy or happiness.
Finding an inner peace takes time.
And in between,
There is the line
So hard to cross.



Something so hard
goes straight to the soul;
it seems impossible to get over
and my heart is left with a big hole.

I'm trying to be happy, wearing a smile;
but I'm dying inside.
The world seems to be fading,
and I just want to run and hide.

Everywhere I go I see your face,
and realize how much I miss you;
and on the day you denied and left me,
a piece of me died too.

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
galdolly
3247 posts 

11/11/2008 9:38 pm
There is not much need to look into the mirrors through these eyes
Visions are drawn by these hearts. Twinge through cons denies
reignin' yet Love & understanding
Should it let be gone …
Should let it be done …

questions maybe are questions

beautiful but sad
thanks for the very wonderful posts
i like them

u take care always
gbu
Smile a smile from the heart.

chechehere
619 posts 

11/11/2008 10:36 pm

 Very touching poem.

DripStrip
59 posts 

11/12/2008 1:04 am

 To deny love,
it would be an injustice within itself
to the name of love....

fantasiamore
3784 posts 

11/12/2008 3:07 am

 pinagbabawal na pag-ibig? o binabawal na pag-ibig? alin, alin ang naiba?
“I hold it true, whatever befall; I it, when I sorrow most.

LusTciOuS
85 posts 

11/12/2008 3:38 pm

 not all love that we offered will be accepted,
nor all love we had given will be treasured.
it is simply because when the flame of love has died,
everything that has meaning will be denied.
denial sometimes one has to ponder,
those happy moments together seems have no end.
but the bottom line is here and now,
to start a new beginning and life anew...

yukka
152 posts 

11/12/2008 8:20 pm

 i understand how you feel when you love someone
and i know the pain of depression.
take care po, God bless you always..

Trisianmay
5868 posts 

11/12/2008 10:52 pm

 ,,,,,Friend just
Teach yourself to speak slowly but think quickly.

Lace03
54 posts 

11/13/2008 8:51 pm

 Trying to forget someone you love is like trying
to remember someone you never knew.

stigma
93 posts 

11/16/2008 7:50 pm

 amazing. so deep. perfectly written. on the outside what you wrote is not like me. but it is what is truly inside of me and im in despair.

candid_candy
64 posts 

11/18/2008 7:56 pm

 shocking and chillingly gripping. Love to you and your loved one.

Invictuz
189 posts 

11/26/2008 9:23 pm

 The worst thing you can do for love is deny it;
so when you find that special someone,
don't let anyone or anything to get in your way.
I met,I laughed,I learned to love,I lied,I lost,I hurt.

Stud_Lee
23 posts 

11/28/2008 4:09 pm

 I believe that true love will last forever...
if it doesn't it just means there's someone else out there
who loves you more.

venusangel
2938 posts 

12/1/2008 2:31 am

 beautiful poem, but sad...
being denied is part of loving, but it`s not the end of the world..
keep on loving..one day SHE will be there beside you to fill the void left in your heart

lynne_8762
18 posts 

12/26/2008 3:40 am

 Try to look at it the other way around, it is still a great pleasure meeting her, knowing her and sharing your life with her, it may not be what you wanted but you have a lot more to cherish.

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