Beyond Forbidden Line
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Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again. |
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11/8/2008 5:19 am |
I liked this a lot - reminds me of a person and an issue I'm struggling with right now. It's short, simple, and beautiful..  
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11/8/2008 8:38 am |
Beautiful poem. Just be friends... [I God is pure love...
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11/8/2008 3:47 pm |
Those words contain a sentiment of truly epic proportions. I have heard of no better way to express the conflict between love and friendship that can occur between two people who can not be with each other. Although I do not know who said it, the worst way to miss someone is to be next to them knowing you can not have them. At least this poem allows a person to be able to express their innermost feelings without putting further stress on what is probably an already strained relationship. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with the world.
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11/8/2008 4:38 pm |
Short, sweet, and so true. I also have a dear friend that I dare never cross that line..  thanks for the friendship.. (*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.*
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11/8/2008 5:28 pm |
I just sent this poem to a man I loved, and who loved me... We'll never again be together, but the memories are oh so sweet. Thanks for expressing what I find impossible to put into words.
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11/8/2008 6:25 pm |
This is great, i'm alone in love with a friend.
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11/8/2008 7:44 pm |
IT'S HARD WHEN YOU FIND YOURSELF FALLING FOR A FRIEND AND YOU KNOW YOU CAN ONLY JUST BE THAT,FROM A FAR.
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11/8/2008 9:12 pm |
I think that your poem is very beautiful and quite striking. It explains so well something that I have gone through I took the chance and i thank God that he felt the same way I do. Now not only do I have my one True Love but also my best friend.
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11/8/2008 11:23 pm |
i have loved it. thanks for writing such poem because they really say what i would fear to tell my friend. keep the spirit.
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11/8/2008 11:57 pm |
This short but poignant poem is a wonderful testament to what it feels like to vainly love a friend ...
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11/9/2008 12:34 am |
Two people can just be friends, but at one point or another, one of them will fall for the other. Maybe temporarily, maybe at the wrong time, maybe too late, or maybe forever!
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11/9/2008 12:50 am |
it is amazing. this is quite the poem. and in such few words, it expresses such feeling and emotion. i'm amazed. though, it only took me 10 seconds to read, I'll remember it for a lifetime.
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11/9/2008 8:39 pm |
A mighty pain to love it is, And 'tis a pain that pain to miss; But of all pains, the greatest pain It is to love, but love in vain.
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11/10/2008 8:46 pm |
Very nice poem..very real.. ...when friendship is there and develops into something MORE, its really difficult to say `I LOVE YOU`..it could either ruin the friendship or turn into something wonderful..which is which? well, why not try 
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11/10/2008 8:50 pm |
I think that your poem is very beautiful and quite striking. It explains so well something that I have gone through I took the chance and i thank God that he felt the same way I do. Now not only do I have my one True Love but also my best friend. Congratulations!! 
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11/11/2008 2:38 pm |
sad but,,,a very nice way of expressing whats in your heart ,,,How are you my dearly Friend hope everything is alright with youingatzzzz Teach yourself to speak slowly but think quickly.  
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11/17/2008 7:31 pm |
    Life is all about hope for better days tomorrow.
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