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If Only I Could  

lickquid
11/7/2008 3:33 pm

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1/17/2009 12:21 pm


If I could write a sonnet
on a star,
Then bottle it and
toss it to the sea,
Would it travel
to the corners of the Earth,
And echo there
the love I hold for thee?

If I could write a sonnet
on the moon,
Then bottle it and
toss it to the winds,
Would it find your heart
So you may briefly know,
Where your love ends
Is where my love begins?

If I could write a sonnet
on the sun,
Then bottle it and
toss it throughout time,
Would someone from a distant galaxy
Find no greater love?

Than that was mine Yet,
I can not write a sonnet
on a star,
Nor moon, nor even on
the blazing sun,
Nor bottle words to send them
Where you are,
Nor coerce our separate hearts
To beat as one.

And so my darling
You will never hear,
The humble words of love
I wrote for thee.
They remain encrypted,
tightly sealed..
And yet they travel
on eternally..


Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
fantasiamore
3784 posts 

11/7/2008 3:51 pm

 hmmmm...very very out of this world......love outta be really, but just needs to be grounded all the time!
“I hold it true, whatever befall; I it, when I sorrow most.

Bridgette85
44 posts 

11/7/2008 4:32 pm

 don't wait for your dreams to come true, make them happen..

twilight76111

11/7/2008 5:12 pm

 awwwww... sometimes even if you love the person so much, you'll also reach the point where you'll get tired of trying to reach out and just love him/her in silence..then..wait for him/her to notice you AGAIN

sugaronly
3486 posts 

11/7/2008 5:54 pm

 wow another great poem you made ...
if only i could
talk to her
i tell her
how much
you care...
The most beautiful things cannot b seen& touched-they must felt with heart

Dare2rhyme
26 posts 

11/7/2008 6:11 pm

 very beautiful..if only she could hear..
The best and most beautiful things in the world
cannot be seen or even touched-they must be felt with the heart.

PinaiLove
48 posts 

11/7/2008 6:21 pm

 You know when you have found your princess
because you not only have a smile on your face
but in your heart as well.

AceL33
39 posts 

11/7/2008 6:48 pm

 I think its nice when people find love,
because I feel like everyone deserves it.

nice one, bro..another heartwarming poem.

DeepShine
35 posts 

11/7/2008 9:15 pm

 Somewhere over the rainbow,
skies are blue,
and the love that you dare to dream
really do come true.

take care, bro..

Pretty_DoLL
36 posts 

11/7/2008 10:15 pm

 i thought this poem was wonderful,
its the way i feel about a guy that i really like.
It reminds me of him. tnx for sharing it here.

Ash_Leigh
45 posts 

11/7/2008 11:42 pm

 This touched my heart,
for I am waiting also for my lover
that cannot be mine at this time.

illusion_angel
60 posts 

11/8/2008 11:42 pm

 Nobody understands love. It seems to be Universal. Timeless.
Yet, it's also very individual, filtered by our own lives and expectations. I don't understand love, and can't understand love, because it's a different thing for each of us.

kazzandra
80 posts 

11/11/2008 8:05 pm

 We say we love flowers, yet we pluck them.
We say we love trees, yet we cut them down.
And some people still wonder why some are afraid
when they are told they are loved....

venusangel
2938 posts 

12/1/2008 2:08 am

 somewhat frustrating wish? ..write a sonnet for Venus then

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