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7/31/2008 10:43 pm
Last Read: 10/4/2008 2:43 am
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When life and love have torn apart your heart, where do the shattered pieces lie?
I hope I never have to suffer The way you do. And I don't even know How much life deserted you.
My misery is just a joke Compared to what you must feel. My greatest fear is an illusion, To you, your fear is real.
You cry for help, But you know they don't hear. They're just too far when you thought they were near.
You see no light And you gave up on looking for the sun Cause you need miracles To come along - to find it.
Of the shock in the wave, Creatures of the dimness. Chattering amongst the green, Everything slows in stillness What is this we see?
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Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
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37 posts 7/31/2008 11:09 pm |
i know how you felt I've felt the same way often but could never put it in any other words other than i wanted to crawl-up in a corner and hide from every thing in my mind, but the irony is that no one can hide no matter how much that person wishes to!
well i guess I'm trying to say, it was awesome!
love always,
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44 posts 7/31/2008 11:34 pm |
i was touched by this is this another song? another posts of yours? heartfelt, teary eyes, beutiful ...stillness clears everything
heart mind soul
with clear vissions yet ... i do hope stillness could clear out sad memories
Open your minds and observe...Live in Stillness and Silence...Everything and Everyone can be a teacher in a process that never ends...and most of All the Divine in You... ~unknown, Light Spirit
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40 posts 8/1/2008 1:13 am |
This poem, honestly, the best on the site so far. It's so real and i can relate so well. You have a talent for poetry, really.
happy weekend..
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40 posts 8/1/2008 1:25 am |
No matter how smart someone is, they'll never realize what they have, until it is gone.
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34 posts 8/1/2008 1:33 am |
Sometimes we are too busy trying to get through a closed door that we miss the open window beside it.
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1790 posts 8/1/2008 10:18 pm |
VERY NICE POEM...
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52 posts 8/1/2008 10:44 pm |
this poem really touched me. i mean its like it was written for me. so i could see it and know that other feel the same way i do and that i'm not alone. this one is going to keep me going through me. so to the author i would like to say great job. this is something to cherish and hold dear to your heart and be proud of.
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710 posts 8/2/2008 12:11 am |
the shattered pieces are always embedded in the memory to be easily picked up when one is ready to put them back together... it will never be the same again but the scars which held them together is a living testimony for the faith, hope and love, we all possess...
when friends meet, hearts warm!!! 
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37 posts 8/2/2008 1:10 am |
sometimes we picture ourselves as a tiny insignificant star, chasing a beautiful moon. But little did we know that we are being followed and loved by a patient cloud.
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28 posts 8/2/2008 5:59 pm |
beautiful. hope you feel the sun the light the warmth somehow someday too!
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30 posts 8/3/2008 7:47 pm |
When you feel that all is lost, hold onto your love at any cost.
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99 posts 10/2/2008 4:22 pm |
Love is a hard rock between two people and can't be torn apart.
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63 posts 10/3/2008 10:27 pm |
Love is a promise, once given never forgotten, never let it disappear... it will forever be in my heart.
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