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A Lullaby Of Pain..  

lickquid
11/1/2009 1:41 pm

Last Read:
11/20/2009 5:26 am

It's so painful to see her there,
lying on the bed crying,
She's hurting so bad there's no denying.

The baby so young and sound asleep,
in my heart my love for them is so deep.

I want to hold and comfort her,
and tell her everything's going to be alright.
I watch as she struggles to get up
and turn out the light.

She holds a picture and softly say's
why did you have to leave,
i miss you so much.

I lay my hand on her head
to caress her beautiful hair,
But i know she can't feel my touch,
'cos the pain went through
every inch of her heart.

A tear falls from my eye
as it's time for me to go,
I look at my little baby
and i say love you,
I'm the daddy you'll never know.

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.
frozenflower3
250 posts 

11/1/2009 2:52 pm

 this is so sad. did he die in the Ondoy calamity?

barehugz
49 posts 

11/1/2009 4:03 pm

 Awwwww this is so sad but i really enjoyed this poem a lot.
This poem is so sad like i said
but it gives off everything your feeling.
Like you can't be there for the family you have gave away.
I mean seeing them crying
well, the wife and then having the baby never knowing
who her or his father is ever.
That must be really hard.
But you did an amazing job on this poem.
keep it up. keep on writing.
love always and forever.

DeadlySweet
49 posts 

11/1/2009 5:40 pm

 Honestly that gives me a goose bumps and it was really sad..
simple poem but could really touch someone's heart.

Trisianmay
5850 posts 

11/1/2009 6:09 pm

 beautiful but sad,,,
Soko is very lucky having a kind and sweet daddy like you
How's you na Friend
Teach yourself to speak slowly but think quickly.

dearylove
48 posts 

11/1/2009 6:52 pm

 This poem is so beautiful,
haunting , and sad.
The ending was...
can't describe it..
but I got a good vivid image
..formed in it.

kryztal_babe
50 posts 

11/1/2009 10:04 pm

 How sad this poem is,
really hard losing someone rather in death
or walking out on the family.
This reached into the heart
and stirred emotions as a good poem should.
..Awesome..

m2ec4u
90 posts 

11/2/2009 12:04 am

 lei...

para kanino ba yan poem na yan???

hmmm....

amabella
782 posts 

11/2/2009 12:37 am

 a beautiful poem..

Sulei
6120 posts 

11/2/2009 2:29 am

 sadness is the blood that runs into a poem veins! Poets are those who never accepted the current situation and sang for the ideal ones! after all they are gifted in drawing live pictures just by their words and their feelings are always used as their ink! Nice piece bro Lickquid!

eb1209
12133 posts

11/2/2009 3:57 am

 Awwwwwww!...But that's life...sometimes, we just have to do what is BEST for everyone...Take care!

tinker_viel
484 posts 

11/2/2009 6:41 am

 another melancholic piece...
would love to see the day you sing of bliss
[SIZE 2]this is me...my heart and my soul...[/SIZE]

jean_1000
381 posts 

11/2/2009 8:41 am

 so beautiful but sad...

pamela1962
326 posts 

11/3/2009 12:21 am

 lei..

i guess it's the spirit that will always live forever in our hearts..

this is a very sad piece, and it rekindles old memories of loved ones who have already gone to heaven

take care...

still...

kazzandra
80 posts 

11/3/2009 3:18 am

 I must say...this is a very chilling poem.
i really like it and hope to see more stuff from you...
its very...touching...
the descriptions of her are so rich.
it was very easy to visualize.
so tragic.
i can't fathom how this experience would feel like.
this is a very good representation.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 3:53 am
    Quoting frozenflower3:
    this is so sad. did he die in the Ondoy calamity?
Behind the thick mask she wears
There is a child i lost a long time ago.

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 3:56 am
    Quoting barehugz:
    Awwwww this is so sad but i really enjoyed this poem a lot.
    This poem is so sad like i said
    but it gives off everything your feeling.
    Like you can't be there for the family you have gave away.
    I mean seeing them crying
    well, the wife and then having the baby never knowing
    who her or his father is ever.
    That must be really hard.
    But you did an amazing job on this poem.
    keep it up. keep on writing.
    love always and forever.
That she was more
Than you or me
Because an Angel is what
She was truly meant to be.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 3:57 am
    Quoting DeadlySweet:
    Honestly that gives me a goose bumps and it was really sad..
    simple poem but could really touch someone's heart.
So as she goes
Heaven only knows..
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 4:00 am
    Quoting Trisianmay:
    beautiful but sad,,,
    Soko is very lucky having a kind and sweet daddy like you
    How's you na Friend
My daughter is the one I turn to
when I need a little love and some care.
She is the one I can rely on
to reassure me and always be there.

These words are a thank you,
my sweetest friend.
The face I love to remember
and the one I will always defend.

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 4:04 am
    Quoting dearylove:
    This poem is so beautiful,
    haunting , and sad.
    The ending was...
    can't describe it..
    but I got a good vivid image
    ..formed in it.
I just wanna thank you for being this way,
and for being here for me.

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 4:07 am
    Quoting kryztal_babe:
    How sad this poem is,
    really hard losing someone rather in death
    or walking out on the family.
    This reached into the heart
    and stirred emotions as a good poem should.
    ..Awesome..
This poem means a lot to me.
it reminds me of an 'angel'.
she passed away a couple of years ago.
i miss her so much. thank you..
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/3/2009 4:08 am
    Quoting m2ec4u:
    lei...

    para kanino ba yan poem na yan???

    hmmm....
An Angel is what she is to me
That's what she was truly meant to be
As her time on earth has past
Her memory will always last..
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

candid_candy
64 posts 

11/3/2009 1:20 pm

 Very very sad
but it is a wonderful poem
you are a great writer
excellent job bro lickquid..
love always,
candy

ANGELIC_LYN
146 posts 

11/4/2009 5:38 am

 muztah?mizz u!

arian3031
10 posts 

11/5/2009 4:31 am

 ..i love it..really beautiful..touching..galing talaga..muahhhzz...turuan mo nga ako hehehehe..

_3sha_
99 posts 

11/5/2009 4:38 am

 again.. the ending.. wow!
great job!
i really love your poems..
they make me sad, though..
i hope ur ok!
i'm still readin ur poems!!
luv um!

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/5/2009 5:09 am

 thank you..
you're so nice and kind..
You are worth not for what you have.
Not even for who you are.
But for what others have become because of you.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/5/2009 5:13 am
    Quoting Sulei:
    sadness is the blood that runs into a poem veins! Poets are those who never accepted the current situation and sang for the ideal ones! after all they are gifted in drawing live pictures just by their words and their feelings are always used as their ink! Nice piece bro Lickquid!
bro sulei, We gather strength from sadness and from pain
Each time we die we learn to live again.
Sad times, they're bound to pass.
The trick is to make the good times last..

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/5/2009 5:16 am
    Quoting eb1209:
    Awwwwwww!...But that's life...sometimes, we just have to do what is BEST for everyone...Take care!
That's true, ms EB,
Life is a process of living and learning,
longing and losing,
with teasing and laughing
filling the gaps in-between.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/5/2009 5:22 am
    Quoting tinker_viel:
    another melancholic piece...
    would love to see the day you sing of bliss
Thanks for dropping by, kabsat...
You make me happy when skies are gray.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

_pearl_
59 posts 

11/6/2009 4:18 am

 This is so sad, yet again.. absolutely heartbreaking.
I'm sorry if this is personal and from real life...
nobody should ever have to go through that.
Another sad write, but with the emotion..
the reader couldn't stop reading. Well done!

sun_set
61 posts 

11/6/2009 5:17 am

 Lord, help us to accept the pains and conflicts
that come to us each day
as opportunities to grow
as people and become more like you.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:19 pm

 Though my words are few;
my heart is true.
Friends I can make new,
but none are as sweet as you.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:24 pm
    Quoting pamela1962:
    lei..

    i guess it's the spirit that will always live forever in our hearts..

    this is a very sad piece, and it rekindles old memories of loved ones who have already gone to heaven

    take care...

    still...
They will not
be forgotten.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:26 pm
    Quoting kazzandra:
    I must say...this is a very chilling poem.
    i really like it and hope to see more stuff from you...
    its very...touching...
    the descriptions of her are so rich.
    it was very easy to visualize.
    so tragic.
    i can't fathom how this experience would feel like.
    this is a very good representation.
thanks for your nice comments. have a blessed Sunday.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:31 pm
    Quoting candid_candy:
    Very very sad
    but it is a wonderful poem
    you are a great writer
    excellent job bro lickquid..
    love always,
    candy
Be the living expression of God's kindness:
kindness in your face,
kindness in your eyes,
kindness in your smile.
Take care...
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:33 pm

 I don't miss you and you alone; I miss you and me together..
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:34 pm
    Quoting arian3031:
    ..i love it..really beautiful..touching..galing talaga..muahhhzz...turuan mo nga ako hehehehe..
sure..i will..kelan ba...
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/7/2009 2:36 pm
    Quoting _3sha_:
    again.. the ending.. wow!
    great job!
    i really love your poems..
    they make me sad, though..
    i hope ur ok!
    i'm still readin ur poems!!
    luv um!
I would thank you from the bottom of my heart,
but for you my heart has no bottom.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

UniqueCorn
63 posts 

11/7/2009 3:51 pm

 The Sun is Still Shining,
The Sky Is Still Blue,
But Life Here Just Isn't The Same
Without You...

SouthWind
59 posts 

11/8/2009 1:22 am

 It is a curious sensation:
the sort of pain that goes
mercifully beyond our powers of feeling.
When your heart is broken,
your boats are burned:
nothing matters any more.
It is the end of happiness
and the beginning of peace.

CreamyShake
82 posts 

11/8/2009 1:13 pm

 This is heart clenching. My heart bleeds for you, bro..

stirrcrazy
63 posts 

11/9/2009 1:12 pm

 Although it's difficult today to see beyond the sorrow,
May looking back in memory help comfort you tomorrow.

dawn_blitz
69 posts 

11/10/2009 1:09 pm

 Life's what's important. Walking, houses, family. Birth and pain and joy. Acting's just waiting for a custard pie. That's all.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/11/2009 1:14 pm
    Quoting UniqueCorn:
    The Sun is Still Shining,
    The Sky Is Still Blue,
    But Life Here Just Isn't The Same
    Without You...
I know I'm nothing without you...

Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/11/2009 1:18 pm
    Quoting _pearl_:
    This is so sad, yet again.. absolutely heartbreaking.
    I'm sorry if this is personal and from real life...
    nobody should ever have to go through that.
    Another sad write, but with the emotion..
    the reader couldn't stop reading. Well done!
I can no other answer make, but, thanks, and thanks.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/11/2009 1:20 pm
    Quoting sun_set:
    Lord, help us to accept the pains and conflicts
    that come to us each day
    as opportunities to grow
    as people and become more like you.
Never, never, never, never ever give up!
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/11/2009 1:21 pm
    Quoting SouthWind:
    It is a curious sensation:
    the sort of pain that goes
    mercifully beyond our powers of feeling.
    When your heart is broken,
    your boats are burned:
    nothing matters any more.
    It is the end of happiness
    and the beginning of peace.
There is no pain so great as the memory of joy in present grief.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/11/2009 1:23 pm
    Quoting CreamyShake:
    This is heart clenching. My heart bleeds for you, bro..
Nothing begins,
and nothing ends,
That is not paid with moan;
For we are born in others pain
And perish in our own.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

_lipstick_
98 posts 

11/12/2009 3:54 am

 sad and beautiful..
remember that
Pain is life -
the sharper,
the more evidence of life.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/12/2009 1:23 pm
    Quoting stirrcrazy:
    Although it's difficult today to see beyond the sorrow,
    May looking back in memory help comfort you tomorrow.
There is a joy in sorrow which none but a mourner can know.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

lickquid
3161 posts 

11/12/2009 1:26 pm
    Quoting dawn_blitz:
    Life's what's important. Walking, houses, family. Birth and pain and joy. Acting's just waiting for a custard pie. That's all.
The heart forgets its sorrow and ache.
Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.

ion_chief
127 posts 

11/14/2009 1:06 pm

 hey...this is really sad..
wow, i hope this isn't true...
very deep..i felt it..
it just got to me,
i cried...
keep it up.

stigma
93 posts 

11/16/2009 12:54 pm

 We lose the loved ones and we all miss them so much and,
in my case, it still hurts so bad some days
I don't feel like getting out of bed.

mia_belle
485 posts 

11/17/2009 1:37 pm

 lolo lick,
Pain drips from your poem..
death takes so much from us..
the one thing it can't take
is the love you have for her...
Rest peacefully, Angel..
*It's all said & done, it's real, and it's been fun.*

pauleen80
2 posts 

11/17/2009 7:54 pm

 so beautifully written with a background so real ... a poet with a class ... great work!!!

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