23211 posts 1/29/2010 7:34 pm
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Patawad, ...Mahal Kita...
"Forgive Me,But I Love You"
~eb1209~
It's this feeling deep inside,
Right now, I can no longer hide;
I've been keeping my high pride,
And so, I always step aside.
Alam mo ba kung gaano kahirap?
Ang makapiling ka lang sa aking pangarap?
Puso ko'y naghihinagpis,
Sama ng loob, walang kawangis.
I have longed to hold you;
I have dreamt to kiss you;
In my world that is blue,
There is no one but you.
Sa aking panaginip, ako sayo'y kumakapit;
Yakap mong kay higpit,ay huwag mong ipagkait.
Hapdi ng dibdib, ang lagi kong kaniig;
Masahol pa sa halamang, hindi mo dinilig.
I beg of you to please forgive me,
For loving you, is everything I can offer thee;
I may look distant, but I'm near, can't you see?
I have nothing left to offer, but ALL that is ME.
Subalit napakalayo mo, sinta ko;
Pag-ibig mo lamang ang hiling ko,
Ano ba ang kulang sa pagkatao ko?
Bakit ako'y tahasang itinataboy mo?
Do you hate me because you love me?
Or do you love me, but it just cannot be?
Am I not worth to make you happy?
Or simply, you wish you can have me?
Isipan ko'y laging tuliro,
Ang puso ko, ikaw lang ang itinuturo;
Sana, kapag ikaw'y natauhan na;
Ipagpatawad mo, "Mahal Kita"..
Original composition by: eb1209
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Just call me ELZ 
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1/30/2010 10:34 am
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 kakalungkot naman ng poem mo Ate
U will always b w/ Me Now & ever eternally
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1/30/2010 10:40 am
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Elz,
What a gift you have!!! So much emotions to put in words. I felt like seeing all those melodramatic teleseryas been watching. All the love gone wrong. Wow, can only cry with you. Having all the feelings to the love of my life that wont appear. Hoping some day. It's like all the wrong suitor? But, know when the true one appears...
Have a great weekend and God loves you. Thanks for sharing your gift.  
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1152 posts 1/30/2010 11:11 am |
nice composition Elz
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1/30/2010 4:05 pm
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thank you so much for posting this song, lovely friend, ROXY...Masarap isayaw ng sweet music ito..
Just call me ELZ
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1/30/2010 4:07 pm
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Quoting kissey75:
kakalungkot naman ng poem mo Ate
Honga he...Nakakaiyak no? tagos sa kaliit-liitang himaymay ng aking damdamin... ..Ang puso nga naman, pag wasak...ang hapdi! 
Just call me ELZ
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1/30/2010 4:10 pm
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Oh, thank you so much, sweetie...I just had to do a Taglish version, because FFF does not approve the pure Tagalog, so I decided to compose this Taglish...I think, my very first time here at FFF...The last time, I had to have a translation from Tagalog to English, not alternate.....I guess, you can say, I am "expired" ? 
Just call me ELZ
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1/30/2010 4:11 pm
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Quoting frozenflower3:
Elz,
What a gift you have!!! So much emotions to put in words. I felt like seeing all those melodramatic teleseryas been watching. All the love gone wrong. Wow, can only cry with you. Having all the feelings to the love of my life that wont appear. Hoping some day. It's like all the wrong suitor? But, know when the true one appears...
Have a great weekend and God loves you. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Thanks a lot, Tess...You know that a lot of men and women out there who can relate to the BIG time reality of this poem...At least, in our dreams, everything and anything can happen...Thank God for that..At least...
Just call me ELZ
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1/30/2010 4:13 pm
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My appreciation, Manny...Gusto mong gawan kita para sa LOVE mo this Valentine? 
Just call me ELZ
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1/31/2010 9:15 am
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Wow! Naman po ang hapdi ng puso nagbabasa.
   within each one of us, and let it begin with me (and each one of us)..one breath at a time.
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79 posts 1/31/2010 6:23 pm |
You are in love
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1/31/2010 9:29 pm
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Princess...Lagi naman akong in love...Iba-ibang klaseng love nga lang... ...Thanks for visiting! See you again in Cebu this coming October...Godwilling!
MiAMi Elz |
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Just call me ELZ
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2795 posts 2/1/2010 9:02 am |
| AMS, napaka-loving mo ... sana kahit kalahati ng ugali mo eh makuha ko. Why kaya ganito na ako ngayon? |
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When I  low my friends et al give me energy.
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2/1/2010 11:06 am
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Quoting im_stacy:
AMS, napaka-loving mo ... sana kahit kalahati ng ugali mo eh makuha ko. Why kaya ganito na ako ngayon?
Stacy, lahat tayo mapagmahal..Likas na sa atin yan...But the painful truth is that, NOT everyone is willing to show that loving emotions...Huwag mong ipagkait...Huwag mong pigilan...Siguro, past experiences made you a little bit numb, and the present situation may not be as fulfilling....But, life is such...
Just call me ELZ
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2/1/2010 11:09 am
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It's LOVE MONTH, Jeffrey...Time to emote to the maxxx......Thank you!  ..Hindi naman ako nahawa sayo...ang lagay eh, iba naman yung situation mo...Nandiyan naman "siya", yung sa akin..."invisible" , kasi sa pangarap ko lang siya nakikita..
Just call me ELZ
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2/1/2010 5:05 pm
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| Which reminds me of...ehem!...In fairness and in all honesty...Siya pa lang ang nakasayaw ko ng sweet at cheek to cheek pa since time immemorial, and nagkataon pa na on the night of my bday diyan sa JAX... |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/1/2010 5:08 pm
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You know what? I've authored lots of poems since High School, and they were all original, kaya lang, I thought I won't make money by being a writer or a journalist...So, hayan, FREE for ALL na lahat... ...Ang magnakaw ng compositions ko, eh..masaya! |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:07 pm
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| I was more talented and inspired then...You know, HS life was my best life.. |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:08 pm
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This is nothing to what I used to..America has ruined my command of Proper English Language...Now, I'm speaking and writing just like an ordinary American Junk... |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:10 pm
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Quoting jane82:
Wow! Naman po ang hapdi ng puso nagbabasa.
| This post of yours was released so late by FFF Janey...but thank you for trying to speak Tagalog..or write, I mean.. |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:11 pm
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| Another late release? Oh dear! Thess, thank you so much for the info and for being a very nice lady that you are...My appreciation.. |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:12 pm
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| Paano ka bang mangarap Ondong? Sumisigaw ka rin ba? |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:14 pm
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| My lovely friend, Unfortunately, I also have this "selective forgetfulness"....which happens when I deliberately erase a part of the beautiful memory...But who knows? It may happen again.. |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:15 pm
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| Uyyy! naku ha? baka mainlove ako sa kanya......I'm vulnerable these days... |
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Just call me ELZ
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2/2/2010 5:16 pm
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Quoting eb1209:
This is nothing to what I used to..America has ruined my command of Proper English Language...Now, I'm speaking and writing just like an ordinary American Junk...
| This is nothing compared to.... |
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Just call me ELZ
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Quoting eb1209:
Princess...Lagi naman akong in love...Iba-ibang klaseng love nga lang......Thanks for visiting! See you again in Cebu this coming October...Godwilling!
MiAMi Elz
Miami,
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