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We started from the very end walked back ward and called a sweetheart just a friend! we sailed anti-clock wise without a thought or stop as if we can make the river go from bottom to top! or make the ground showers the sky with raindrop! we learned the eyes language before our tongues talk and we made the baby right after birth walk we touched each other's soul without giving the body any role! and when we met she trembled and sweat she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her and puzzled me and she wont be back to my nest unless she materialize what she felt! 
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9/26/2008 9:54 pm |
and when we met she trembled and sweat she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her and puzzled me and she wont be back to my nest unless she materialize what she felt!  sorry i can't control myself laughing here smile and be happy always 
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9/26/2008 9:55 pm |
all i can say is this is perfect to "she" smile and be happy always
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9/26/2008 9:56 pm |
why perfect? coz she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her smile and be happy always
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9/26/2008 10:40 pm |
she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her----coward she looking for bread 
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9/26/2008 11:12 pm |
oh my!...thought the reversals made it all magnetic, but turning repulsive instead.....extraordinary really! how can you expect what is normal when all is somewhat contorted?      
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 9/26/2008 11:33 pm |
she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her----coward she
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9/26/2008 11:47 pm |
Hi sir sulei, the poet in you comes out again. I hope she would not run away.  Follow your dreams... and hit the mark.   
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9/26/2008 11:57 pm |
when we think backwards we can lose our step..be out of synch and be lost in the groove..but I somehow got your grip..maybe what she need is more time..just don`t want to be like the moth that burned into the fire..yes your nest is cozy but it`s your moves that can make her stay..or totally scare her away..
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9/27/2008 12:07 am |
oh my!...thought the reversals made it all magnetic, but turning repulsive instead.....extraordinary really! how can you expect what is normal when all is somewhat contorted?
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9/27/2008 12:22 am |
ahemmm though shall not intrude her random thoughts brace her with loving restraints 
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9/27/2008 1:30 am |
why perfect? coz she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her
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9/27/2008 1:30 am |
Hello my friend Sulie, How are you?
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9/27/2008 1:33 am |
and she wont be back to my nest unless she materialize what she felt! hmmm reaaly queery mind hahh made us wonder happy weekend be blessed as always be happy always  Smile a smile from the heart.
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9/27/2008 2:02 am |
He`s a poet..got to think the way poets do..but yes..he`s a little bit out of line here..
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9/27/2008 6:17 am |
and when we met she trembled and sweat she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her and puzzled me and she wont be back to my nest unless she materialize what she felt! sorry i can't control myself laughing here but i know it is releasing too!
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9/27/2008 6:22 am |
all i can say is this is perfect to "she" I can only sail beyond the limits of my mind! 
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9/27/2008 6:24 am |
why perfect? coz she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her 
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9/27/2008 6:34 am |
she made all the excuses to run a way just when i thought she would sit the truth scared her----coward she  she is not coward! but it is just similar to contradicting feelings of a virgin girl when she is about to have her first time!  i hope i gave a good example though!
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9/27/2008 6:36 am |
oh my!...thought the reversals made it all magnetic, but turning repulsive instead.....extraordinary really! how can you expect what is normal when all is somewhat contorted? I did not expect! I just stated facts, and concluded! so that we put things on their right tracks!
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9/27/2008 6:39 am |
coward she..or thinking she? the third option is she was shocked when she saw all her fantasies come true!
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9/27/2008 6:42 am |
Hi sir sulei, the poet in you comes out again. I hope she would not run away. u mean the insane devil in me is coming out again! well, there is no other choice! she will either keep running at least in her mind, or next she will run towards me!
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9/27/2008 6:53 am |
when we think backwards we can lose our step..be out of synch and be lost in the groove..but I somehow got your grip..maybe what she need is more time..just don`t want to be like the moth that burned into the fire..yes your nest is cozy but it`s your moves that can make her stay..or totally scare her away.. I liked the way how u looked at it! but it is much simpler than that! it is the difference between talking all the time on cyberworld "theoretically" and the impact of facts! i admit that it can be shocking some times! like reading a novel, when you feel your self one of its persons and all of the sudden, you find out your in the presence of them in real!
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9/27/2008 7:34 am |
He`s a poet..got to think the way poets do..but yes..he`s a little bit out of line here.. but at the same time, they keep being so noble no to play with other's feelings, and that is the concept here!
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9/27/2008 7:40 am |
ahemmm though shall not intrude her random thoughts brace her with loving restraints emotionally and spiritually! but don't expect to jump in the ocean without getting wet!
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9/27/2008 7:44 am |
I know one who always made excuses when one gets scared by her own shadow, she keeps running a way, and the shadow keeps following at the same distance!
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9/27/2008 7:46 am |
Hello my friend Sulie, How are you?
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9/27/2008 7:50 am |
and she wont be back to my nest unless she materialize what she felt! hmmm reaaly queery mind hahh made us wonder happy weekend be blessed as always be happy always now u wonder, next time u may ponder poets have the previlidge of saying what they want! and it is up to the reader if he/she wants to rephrase them, accuse them, praise them or critisize them! have a nice weekend too, my friend!
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9/27/2008 7:52 am |
i just had to react telling how i felt...but yeah, there is what you call a poet's language and only he can tell what he wants conveyed so we can at least grasp it right...sometimes, we can have a subjective or even an objective interpretation of what a poem is all about...
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9/27/2008 11:36 am |
Hello Mr. Sulei, how interesting and nice of a poem you wrote here. I thought it was another fine artwork of yours and really enjoyed this one. From what i gather, you seem to be reminiscing of a past love that ended abruptly somehow. But now it appears this past love has once again reappeared to you, perhaps for a second coming. So you feel as if you are returning back in time similar to when one rewinds an event being watched on DVD. You want to grasp back the good and happy moments again that you have shared with the special person but somehow you feel that the moment the chance presents itself again, she appears all of the sudden distant and unreachable. So you feel somewhat inspired to be driven to either continue to pursue her or set her free and wait to see if she would return back to you. You seem to hint also that you want to help her realize that she may not be running away from you but rather she is running away from her own shadows of the pastHope this is close enough of an interpretation
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9/27/2008 11:59 am |
life (and love, for that matter) shouldn't be too complicated. although, some wo/men make it so. hello my friend.
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9/27/2008 4:55 pm |
life (and love, for that matter) shouldn't be too complicated. although, some wo/men make it so. hello my friend. ur presence and ur thoughts complete each other my friend
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9/27/2008 5:00 pm |
... and poets got the right to play with their words and ideas the way they want! but at the same time, they keep being so noble no to play with other's feelings, and that is the concept here!I know how you felt Bro Sulei..but that`s how it is..no hurt feelings I hope..
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9/27/2008 5:01 pm |
my dear chery, when one gets scared by her own shadow, she keeps running a way, and the shadow keeps following at the same distance!
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9/27/2008 5:05 pm |
Hello Mr. Sulei, how interesting and nice of a poem you wrote here. I thought it was another fine artwork of yours and really enjoyed this one. From what i gather, you seem to be reminiscing of a past love that ended abruptly somehow. But now it appears this past love has once again reappeared to you, perhaps for a second coming. So you feel as if you are returning back in time similar to when one rewinds an event being watched on DVD. You want to grasp back the good and happy moments again that you have shared with the special person but somehow you feel that the moment the chance presents itself again, she appears all of the sudden distant and unreachable. So you feel somewhat inspired to be driven to either continue to pursue her or set her free and wait to see if she would return back to you. You seem to hint also that you want to help her realize that she may not be running away from you but rather she is running away from her own shadows of the pastHope this is close enough of an interpretation let me say this! first of all, i love the way u ananlyze things! and like how transparent u make them! secondly, whether you hit the liver of the truth or not, this is not your problem, because your prodiction of a poet thoughts doesn't have to match the reality! we can only ponder when linking the vague lines together! thanks my friend for coming back!
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9/27/2008 10:00 pm |
i wonder what kind of truth that made her scared,,, Teach yourself to speak slowly but think quickly.  
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 9/28/2008 2:37 am |
Hi Sulei!  ...I was just wondering, the blogs the past week is all about walking away......Well, just to prove that when things don't work, let us not force it...JUST WALK AWAY, gracefully....  
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9/28/2008 8:11 am |
bro Joseph, I liked the way how u looked at it! but it is much simpler than that! it is the difference between talking all the time on cyberworld "theoretically" and the impact of facts! i admit that it can be shocking some times! like reading a novel, when you feel your self one of its persons and all of the sudden, you find out your in the presence of them in real!
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9/28/2008 8:38 am |
... and poets got the right to play with their words and ideas the way they want! but at the same time, they keep being so noble no to play with other's feelings, and that is the concept here!If you can honestly say yes then I will totally believe that arrogance is not what you felt towards the woman you talk about here..and that you really want to touch her soul..and here`s the question.. As a man of the world you picture yourself to be..can you possibly treat a woman as your equal and not as someone inferior?
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9/28/2008 6:09 pm |
and the readers of their work has also all the right in the world to air what they think as to how they grasp it with their unpoetic mind.. it`s the poet`s obligation to explain himself..these are only comments not defamation..or in any way has a malicious intent. I know how you felt Bro Sulei..but that`s how it is..no hurt feelings I hope..  poets are different from article writers! they get inspires in a way or another, this inspiration moves their feeling, and the final step is that they picture their special feelings with their words! and it is always up to the readers to look at these pictures they way they want, and the way they can understand!
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9/28/2008 6:16 pm |
With due respect..let`s end this discussion and move on with our lives..and by the way..I`m not with the group anymore.. then u came to comment, so I replied to ur comment!! I did not invite you to comment on my poems or blogs, and I did not open a description with u so that u ask me to end it now! i just find they way you react so strange, specially that i always showed respect to you! now about the group, whether you left or stayed, it is not my business, and it was not me who invited you to join, in the first place! God bless you bro!
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9/28/2008 6:33 pm |
There is one last question that I want you to answer not only for me but for all who idolizes you.. If you can honestly say yes then I will totally believe that arrogance is not what you felt towards the woman you talk about here..and that you really want to touch her soul..and here`s the question.. As a man of the world you picture yourself to be..can you possibly treat a woman as your equal and not as someone inferior? 2. I have answered your question just because I have no complex in my life of whatsoever, and i have nothing to hide! if i were narrow-minded, I would say, it is none of your business and u don't have the right to ask me! 3. No body is idolizing me, I just have some good genuine friends who know me so well, and i am proud of their friendship! If u feel not comfortable with that, it is your problem, and i will pray to God in order to help u come over this obstacle! 4. u say: "if u can honestly..." I am honest person, and say every thing honestly, but if u don't believe that, it wont bother me much! 5. what i felt towards the woman subject of this poem, is something just between me and her, and she knows who is she, and she very happy about it, because she knows what am talking about precisely! and by the way, she is a very smart lady, and cant be mislead so easily 6. did i picture my self as the man of the world? how and when? just give me one example please! though, I liked the idea so much and may be i would work on it! bro Joseph, I hope I answered all your questions and things making u wonder about me all the time! good luck with you life!
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9/28/2008 6:35 pm |
she can run but she can't hide
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9/28/2008 6:37 pm |
i wonder what kind of truth that made her scared ,,,
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9/28/2008 6:40 pm |
Hi Sulei! ...I was just wondering, the blogs the past week is all about walking away......Well, just to prove that when things don't work, let us not force it...JUST WALK AWAY, gracefully.... that is true Elz, but I also want u to know, that things are working well, as a matter of fact, very well, and i cant wish for more than that!
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9/28/2008 6:59 pm |
I know you would "laugh" at it! but i know it is releasing too! good morningsmile and be happy always
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9/28/2008 7:00 pm |
condluding, or...? smile and be happy always
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9/28/2008 7:38 pm |
true good morning good morning belle! how r u today? hope u have had a good weekend!
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9/28/2008 7:40 pm |
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9/28/2008 9:56 pm |
1. my simple answer is yes, i believe in gender equality, and i worked hard on this subject! i can even prove it to you if u want! 2. I have answered your question just because I have no complex in my life of whatsoever, and i have nothing to hide! if i were narrow-minded, I would say, it is none of your business and u don't have the right to ask me! 3. No body is idolizing me, I just have some good genuine friends who know me so well, and i am proud of their friendship! If u feel not comfortable with that, it is your problem, and i will pray to God in order to help u come over this obstacle! 4. u say: "if u can honestly..." I am honest person, and say every thing honestly, but if u don't believe that, it wont bother me much! 5. what i felt towards the woman subject of this poem, is something just between me and her, and she knows who is she, and she very happy about it, because she knows what am talking about precisely! and by the way, she is a very smart lady, and cant be mislead so easily 6. did i picture my self as the man of the world? how and when? just give me one example please! though, I liked the idea so much and may be i would work on it! bro Joseph, I hope I answered all your questions and things making u wonder about me all the time! good luck with you life!
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9/28/2008 11:13 pm |
who said poets should explain themselves to the readers? poets are different from article writers! they get inspires in a way or another, this inspiration moves their feeling, and the final step is that they picture their special feelings with their words! and it is always up to the readers to look at these pictures they way they want, and the way they can understand!Actually when I first read it.. it didn`t affect me that much..only when I read the word "repulsive" in someone else`s comment that I read it more closely..
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9/29/2008 12:03 am |
hello kuya sulei, i think i know who she is.....well, you deserve to be happy cause i know you are a true and honest person. Yes, you are surrounded by good friends and from them i know the one you are looking for might come to the scene...just keep on hoping and your dreams may come true... smile, God loves you kuya sulei..
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9/29/2008 12:37 am |
my good friend sulei, do i know her? well, whoever she is, i know she will come to you in due time...just continue to be good and deserving of her love and devotion. You write so well, you must be a born writer....congrats by best friend online ever since i was registered here at fff. yes, i remember the conversation of a grandpa and his grand son...when the boy asked what is the best thing to give for a gift...to someone you love so dearly...love? no, cause one can easily have it, give it,share it....the best thing to give is time because with time, one can't stop it nor control it cause one can't bring back the time that has gone by. So, spend time wisely and cherish it while you still have it. Spend time with the one who means a lot to you coz you never know when your time is over.
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9/29/2008 2:08 am |
hello Chery! am fine my friend! thanks for asking always about me! i hope u r doing fine too!
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9/29/2008 4:33 am |
HELLO!!!
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10/1/2008 1:27 am |
hello kuya sulei, i think i know who she is.....well, you deserve to be happy cause i know you are a true and honest person. Yes, you are surrounded by good friends and from them i know the one you are looking for might come to the scene...just keep on hoping and your dreams may come true... smile, God loves you kuya sulei..
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10/1/2008 1:30 am |
my good friend sulei, do i know her? well, whoever she is, i know she will come to you in due time...just continue to be good and deserving of her love and devotion. You write so well, you must be a born writer....congrats by best friend online ever since i was registered here at fff. yes, i remember the conversation of a grandpa and his grand son...when the boy asked what is the best thing to give for a gift...to someone you love so dearly...love? no, cause one can easily have it, give it,share it....the best thing to give is time because with time, one can't stop it nor control it cause one can't bring back the time that has gone by. So, spend time wisely and cherish it while you still have it. Spend time with the one who means a lot to you coz you never know when your time is over.
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10/1/2008 1:32 am |
HELLO!!!
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10/1/2008 1:33 am |
I'm doing good here friend
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10/1/2008 10:06 am |
hahaha as what you have said in FS..yeah u are right oh well, this is ur blog accept views & opinions i cant say anything more..but i merely know the facts hahahahaha i just hope that it wont affect our team...u know wat i mean, right? good luck broIamALwaYs Hapi,kNowiNgDAt iAmEasilyPLeaSEd
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10/3/2008 5:39 pm |
hahaha as what you have said in FS..yeah u are right oh well, this is ur blog accept views & opinions i cant say anything more..but i merely know the facts hahahahaha i just hope that it wont affect our team...u know wat i mean, right? good luck bro
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10/4/2008 12:37 am |
glad to know ur ok, chery! take care always my friend!
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10/5/2008 7:35 am |
Take care too my friend 
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10/10/2008 7:56 pm |
my friend dolly, now u wonder, next time u may ponder poets have the previlidge of saying what they want! and it is up to the reader if he/she wants to rephrase them, accuse them, praise them or critisize them! have a nice weekend too, my friend! i better keep silentjust enjoyed reading them all queer thoughts querr mind or maybe it is my mind only n my mind happy weekendSmile a smile from the heart.
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10/11/2008 3:51 am |
accuse u i better keep silentjust enjoyed reading them all queer thoughts querr mind or maybe it is my mind only n my mind happy weekendwe become so, when our feelings are greater than our words! when we fear the journey that is taking us to the unknown! when our weary minds stop at the edge of the sword, if we continue, we bleed with hope, and if we step back, we bleed with regrets! regrets of not sailing beyond our weary minds! have a nice weekend too, my friend!
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