AN ATTEMPT TO SAY SOMETHING SWEET TO SOMEONE SPECIAL !
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Since yesterday, or the day before, or even the day before that day, I am trying to say something sweet to her! But i couldn't! As those called netaholic nowadays, I became spending my day and night online, waiting for her to come or pass by, or when very optimistic, to hear her saying: "hi" ! spent all day looking at the sun to compare the sun beams with her hair. spent all the time waiting for the rainbow, to compare its colours with her eyes colours! spent all night imagining the air of paradise, how it could be similar to her breath! listened to all the beautiful birds, to compare their voices with her velvet one! wandered through all the beautiful gardens to see which rose can be compared to her smooth cheeks colour! envied the moon because he can steal a look at her beauty, when no one ever could or should! praised and prayed to God thousands times, because he put all his holly art in creating her! wished I were the air that goes throughout her lungs! wished I were the blood that goes slowly in her great heart! wished...and wished...and wished, to know how and where I can start! feeling like a homeless gypsy that sees his home under her eyelash! feeling like a bird, that trying to build his nest between her silky hair! if there is nothing to thank God for, I thank him because she still there! 
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9/27/2006 4:02 am |
hello Sulei!!! what a lucky gal, she is!!! enjoy the loving feeling!  Tess
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9/27/2006 4:10 am |
U must be in love with her!!!!
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9/27/2006 4:53 am |
kuya sulei, rest assured, she will know about it... ivy
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9/27/2006 7:02 am |
Tess, thanks for visiting my field of words and feelings! If love doesn't exist, we created! because we need to explore that sweet feeling! see you soon!
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9/27/2006 7:05 am |
laughinglou, nice meeting you at the lake of silent feelings! no comments towards you conclusion! Love is the highest feeling we can have, no shame about it! wish you best!
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9/27/2006 7:07 am |
Ivy my sweet lil sis! thanks again for being a regular visitor! looking for the day when i see you in true deep love too! God bless you sweety and enlighten your heart and soul!
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9/27/2006 11:04 am |
Sulei,,,what a wonderful blog I love it,,your getting too much poetic now,friend. well ,,,whoever she is, shes so lucky for giving her a special attention like that. btw, thanks for dropping by in my blog,,,,have a nice chatting friend 
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9/27/2006 11:09 am |
sulei bro.. 2 words! LUV'S CALLIN;?..  do i know her <-- nosey
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9/27/2006 12:33 pm |
Trisian, thanks! aren't we all poets when we feel love? 
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9/27/2006 12:34 pm |
chaseme! At last! it is breaking the silence of my soul!
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9/27/2006 2:50 pm |
nice poem sulei...for whom?
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9/27/2006 3:48 pm |
lovely poem...no doubt about it...only a man in love can write something this beautiful. I think I know who the girl is...I don't blame you bro. She does have that effect to everyone who dare look at her dark still eyes. We are all under her mercy...trust me i know how u feel
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9/28/2006 7:40 am |
Bro deadstar, thanks for reading and commenting on my speaking feeling! bro, in FFF, we are just like sailors who spend most of their lives amongst water! nothing but water! as soon as the come nearby a beautiful lake, they feel their desires exploding, their eyes smiling for a desirable different things! their appetites so good for a different taste! they feel their dreams are almost true! but... as soon as they sail again.. they face reality smashing their faces, to make them again awake! let us enjoy our dreams, as long as they are just dreams! good luck bro, i sincerely say it with all my heart!
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9/30/2006 3:53 am |
Trisian, thanks! aren't we all poets when we feel love?
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10/6/2006 11:09 am |
Bro deadstar, thanks for reading and commenting on my speaking feeling! bro, in FFF, we are just like sailors who spend most of their lives amongst water! nothing but water! as soon as the come nearby a beautiful lake, they feel their desires exploding, their eyes smiling for a desirable different things! their appetites so good for a different taste! they feel their dreams are almost true! but... as soon as they sail again.. they face reality smashing their faces, to make them again awake! let us enjoy our dreams, as long as they are just dreams! good luck bro, i sincerely say it with all my heart!
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