May I Light My Candle Now
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May I "softly" change the rhythm May I gently leave a touch that makes a difference May I intentionally double the meaning to draw a smile amongst the tears exactly as if the sun rising amongst the cloud May I continue ask without a question mark 'cause the morning that caries the answers never seems to come yet and my candle remain never lit May I wish to burn this flesh in the burning fire of you love till I see heaven above cries for you and for me May the rain still fall to wash you your soul till the flood washes your memory and draw the path leading me to your loneliness showing me your naked sadness touching your trembling fingers frozen toes weary eyelashes and the broken heart that still beat though it is falling a part May I be the cloud that does not hide the light but shade your suffering heart May I gather the remaining that spread here and there put an end to your ultimate "no where" kiss your forehead till tomorrow brings back the smile on your lips again May I wash a way your sorrows May I wash a way your pain May I light my candle now tease the wind and laugh at the rain 
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10/21/2009 6:35 am |
Beautiful... [I God is pure love...
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10/21/2009 6:38 am |
whatta beautiful poem Sir  so deep and meaningful 
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10/21/2009 6:39 am |
by all means my dear  
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10/21/2009 6:52 am |
very nice "Keep your eyes on the stars, and your feet on the ground.”
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10/21/2009 7:31 am |
Lovely  Gud gurlz R bad gurlz who dnt get caught...  Yanie24w
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10/21/2009 9:36 am |
yes sulei  u may light ur candle now  just don't touch mine!  lolz!wait a minute  what candle are u talking about?    i'm like a bird! 
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10/21/2009 10:21 am |
Beautiful...
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10/21/2009 10:23 am |
whatta beautiful poem Sir so deep and meaningful
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10/21/2009 10:23 am |
by all means my dear
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10/21/2009 10:25 am |
very nice hope it would do u less lonely by now. but of course, it cant help much with # 6
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10/21/2009 10:29 am |
yes sulei u may light ur candle now just don't touch mine! lolz!wait a minute what candle are u talking about? enjoy ur candle my dear friend 
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10/21/2009 10:35 am |
Lovely and each word came back as a butterfly glad to see u here again
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10/21/2009 2:17 pm |
WOW, SULEI ... SO MANY " MAY I'S " YOU THINK YOU COULD BE DONE WITHIN A DAY WITH ALL OF IT ? GO AHEAD, FEEL FREE TO LIGHT YOUR CANDLE ... JUST SEE TO IT THAT YOU DO NOT FORGET TO PUT SOMETHING UNDERNEATH HENCE YOU MIGHT GET BURNED NICE TO READ YOU BACK HERE !!! HEARTY REGARDS MUA
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10/21/2009 2:43 pm |
you are in deep thought.. good to see you here again sulei     
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10/21/2009 5:01 pm |
WOW, SULEI ... SO MANY " MAY I'S " YOU THINK YOU COULD BE DONE WITHIN A DAY WITH ALL OF IT ? GO AHEAD, FEEL FREE TO LIGHT YOUR CANDLE ... JUST SEE TO IT THAT YOU DO NOT FORGET TO PUT SOMETHING UNDERNEATH HENCE YOU MIGHT GET BURNED NICE TO READ YOU BACK HERE !!! HEARTY REGARDS MUA but again this means I am a polite guy, i wont do a thing without permission
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10/21/2009 5:03 pm |
you are in deep thought.. good to see you here again sulei and yes, i were taken by my thoughts all the way long, and just came up with these rather wishes!
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10/22/2009 7:16 am |
Quoting Mua_hati: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WOW, SULEI ... SO MANY " MAY I'S " YOU THINK YOU COULD BE DONE WITHIN A DAY WITH ALL OF IT ? GO AHEAD, FEEL FREE TO LIGHT YOUR CANDLE ... JUST SEE TO IT THAT YOU DO NOT FORGET TO PUT SOMETHING UNDERNEATH HENCE YOU MIGHT GET BURNED NICE TO READ YOU BACK HERE !!! HEARTY REGARDS MUA -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hello Mua, did u count how many "May" is there in this piece? but again this means I am a polite guy, i wont do a thing without permission -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- HMMM NOW THAT YOU HAVE ASKED, I DID COUNT AND THERE ARE ELEVEN (11) MAY I'S , SULEI.... YES, INDEED... VERY POLITE HOPE YOU ARE DOING FINE ... STAY SAFE !!! HEARTY REGARS
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10/22/2009 5:11 pm |
Quoting Mua_hati: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WOW, SULEI ... SO MANY " MAY I'S " YOU THINK YOU COULD BE DONE WITHIN A DAY WITH ALL OF IT ? GO AHEAD, FEEL FREE TO LIGHT YOUR CANDLE ... JUST SEE TO IT THAT YOU DO NOT FORGET TO PUT SOMETHING UNDERNEATH HENCE YOU MIGHT GET BURNED NICE TO READ YOU BACK HERE !!! HEARTY REGARDS MUA -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- hello Mua, did u count how many "May" is there in this piece? but again this means I am a polite guy, i wont do a thing without permission -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- HMMM NOW THAT YOU HAVE ASKED, I DID COUNT AND THERE ARE ELEVEN (11) MAY I'S , SULEI.... YES, INDEED... VERY POLITE HOPE YOU ARE DOING FINE ... STAY SAFE !!! HEARTY REGARS hopw sweet of you my dear friend  God bless u always .
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10/23/2009 11:31 am |
wow... sulei u r rocking People don't realize that sticks and stones may break your bones, but words shatter the soul.
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10/23/2009 6:09 pm |
wow... sulei u r rocking
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11/7/2009 4:30 am |
SIR, SULIE NICE POEM U HAD, I WISH I CAN RELATE IT!!!!!hope u make ur candle, always light on! HAVE A NICE DAY AND ENJOY LIFE!!!!!GOD BLESS YOU ALWAS'S
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11/7/2009 4:32 pm |
SIR, SULIE NICE POEM U HAD, I WISH I CAN RELATE IT!!!!!hope u make ur candle, always light on! HAVE A NICE DAY AND ENJOY LIFE!!!!!GOD BLESS YOU ALWAS'S
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